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Miss SDL Lineart by ComiPa Miss SDL Lineart by ComiPa
just wanted to draw me an entry to :iconroninsultramix:'s Miss SDL though I won't be joining it anyway XD

both are wearing clothes if they were to join SDL Tokyo

Foreground: Sakana Uo [link]

Back Ground: Kami kaze Hime [link]

WIPS -----> [link] [link]

*** will upload a toned and a colored version by :icontotmoartsstudio2: later.
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Isthell Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Really great! XD
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EternalOmni Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
looks fuckin awesome! :XD:
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Brother-Tico Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Artist
Super awesome! :D Althought the character of the black kimono pose angle looks weird comparing the angle of the background (well I don't know, I just see that way).

But overall, looks fantastic :D
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ComiPa Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
hahahaha yah I just noticed XD will update it when I do have the time XD
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transfuse Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, rc-manga's right, the perspective of the dude in the bg is off. Actually, the perspective on the wall is off too. Gotta set your vanishing points and stick to 'em, man! :3

So you can see what I mean, I've colored over some of the lines in the bg. Fence lines are green, bricks are blue, ground tiles are red, and the dude is in purple:

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As you can see a lot of the lines that are parallel to each other (the blue and green ones) cross paths. They should only cross paths at the vanishing point.

And the dude's purple lines should be parallel to the red ones. That should fix his awkward angle. Hope it's not too confusing.

Anyhow, keep up the cool work. The chic in the foreground looks fuggin' awesome. :)
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ComiPa Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for the tip and guidelines...

I really don't know what happened with the blue and green lines crossing paths since I've set the perspective lines perfectly in mangastudio... I wonder what happened to that wall and fence.

as for the dude... actually it's a dudette she's a girl anyway :) will be fixing her along with the rest I noticed that the whole shoulder was off too.

I'll fix the whole perspective thing later when I get back to work.
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transfuse Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Oh duh, guess it would help if I read the whole description. =P

And no problem man. Just lookin' to help 'cause overall your linework is really badass. If I wasn't so busy with work, I'd take a crack at coloring some of your stuff; this drawing in particular looks like it would be really fuggin' fun. Maybe if I find some free time...
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totmoartsstudio2 Featured By Owner May 16, 2009
who ever is going to color this is going to die!
wait. . . im going to color this. great^^;
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ComiPa Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
don't... gotta fix a lot of things first :lmao:
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xaelasis Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
woow!, great pic, the details!!!!!, really nice work
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